Okay, here’s my honest review. I’ll start with the title. “Miracles on Mysterious Mars”, sounds kinda interesting. It means that the setting will be in outer space. Next, the synopsis, I like that it’s short, concise, and direct to the point. It also mentioned that it’s in the year 2080, so I expect some futuristic gadgets and other sciency stuff. Lastly, the prologue, or was that chapter 1? I was confused. Also, though the grammar is passable, there were a lot of punctuation misplacements. Also, a piece of advice, instead of using (!!!) and (???) for unnamed characters, it’s better to use (Person A) and (Person B). Anyway, keep it up and keep improving, author!!
