I haven't read it yet, but this synopsis left me confused.....................................................................................................
Good fan fic its a world hoping novel so its even better
Writing is okey there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but very rarely
Overall good novel author is not in a hurry to introduce big or OP world right at the beginning, it starts slow at least the first and the second worlds but it is starting to pick up
Very nice..... More chaps pls....... Can you do the D.I.C.E world after this...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am at a crossroad here.......I want to give author 5 stars cause his writing, structure and all that **** is GOLD, Large no of chps DOPE........
BUT see, 2 things I just read in this book make me think its trash.they are
1- MC defends some slutty chick that tried get some dude beat up by her BF [who she cheated on] cause that dude was ugly, but then gets almost punched by her BF who found out she was cheating.....
MC defends her .
2-Read CHP 9.....relationships are forced as ****......like its shallow, not new author level ****......just shallow..so yah'
The first two are of "lookism "and "true beauty" just jusy perfect and i even shead a single tear at rhe end if "true beauty" but then the idiotic mc becomes is just mind triggering in"ip man"he learned the power of kindness and lazzzyness then it get fucking horrible where he fucking become passive as ****.still gonna read the next are and see if it get bett if not then you know.
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls.THIS IS THE BEST!!!!
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