Soul Archiver - Reviews

I'm happy with my work! It's very good!If you disagree, you're just wrong! (for legal reasons this is a joke)But anyway, if you have criticisms and things you think that are better changed, this is the prime time to voice it! The novel's short enough so I can actually fix stuff easily! (but please don't think I'll do anything you ask of me!)When the novel becomes too long,  I'll never change anything ever so don't lose your chance!

This is my own work so I will of course be biased and give it 5 out of 5 stars. Also I've never written anything like this before, so for the time being I'm just having fun with it. I hope you can enjoy it and please leave insights if you can.

quite a good story. it is not easy when you pitch the ordinary with the exceptional. that sounds like a boring one sided match but it actually is not. i was reminded of the movie small soldiers where the gorgons who have been programmed to hide finally decide to fight. maybe i will see that in this story. good job by the author.

I must say that I really like your story.I found some parts wrong while translating.I guess it's a translation error on the site.please edit the system and write fast.

Overall a good story, I just don't care for it personally

The voice shouted in a shaky voice, "How old is he?"

"..."Mike wanted to add something but giving it deeper thought he decided against it. Afterall, If he really told his family they will surely die of heart attack. Afterall, what he got is not but . Imagine being blessed in everything you do. Anything which could go better will go better. if you want a 6 on a die a six will come. if you want double 6, double 6 will come, if you want 6 five times on a die, 6 will come five times and if your life depended on it, two random shuffled deck of cards will be exactly same(a extremely rare almost impossible thing). You would encounter rarest situations and the rarest chances.

Thanks for the chapter.

Elijah : Aren't I more fitted to become a system?

Seeing that, Souma opened his eyes wide in surprise. His lip was shaking as he stared at the message in shock. That was clearly a suspicious reaction.

I really, really loved it. it’s absolutely awesome! ?You’re incredibly talented, and the way you write is so captivating. The emotions, the depth, the imagery. everything is just brilliant. Keep creating such masterpieces. ❤️u200d?