Writing quality isn't that great and lots of artificial word count inflation via unnecessary convoluted descriptions and caracter reintroductions at the start of nearly every chapter that sometimes take up as much as 1/4th of the chapter.What also annoyed me a little bit was the use of German names without actually properly researching their meaning. Like poltergeist. The author used it as a name for the telepathy (which is fine by itself) ability and acted like it was obvious what the ability does just from the name. no it wasn't. The defining characteristic of poltergeists is that they never manifest, so they cannot be perceived apart from their activity, not that they throw things around. Direct speech can also be confusing to follow as the author doesn't make it clear who is speaking and just randomly breaks up direct speech into multiple paragraphs even though it's still the same caracter speaking, which makes it seem like it's another caracter talking. I tried to give this book the benefit of the doubt and bought a couple paywalled chapters. The writing didn't get better, and the word padding also didn't stop. It's fine if you don't care about the free chapters as they don't make you any money, but selling people something of this quality for 11 coins per chapter is just straight up insulting your readers.
