Solus: Path Of The Forsaken - Reviews

Well, my review is based only on the free chapters since I was not fond of it very much. Grammar and writing are very good and the side characters don't look plain, so you don't have to worry about it.What bothered me was the mc's decisions and the novel's pace. MC's decision: he seems to lack normal life "intuition" since he almost get killed because he was an idiot. The novel's pace: we didn't find anything relevant about the world, since the MC stayed in the same place killing useless beasts which improved him at snail pace. I would understand if he wasn't improving that much in 40 chapters if we were getting good information about the world or an info dump but we got nothing. The only thing we know is all the basics: kill a monster and he drops experience. World-building: I have no comments since there is none, we know nothing about the world besides the same repetitive thing "monster spawning on earth". Analyzing only the free chapters, I can't give you a reason to choose this novel to read. There isn't something special/different about it, it's the same repetitive thing you can find in any other novel.If your intuition says "it is good I wanna pay for the chapters and find out". Do it, you may have a surprise and this may be the best novel you've ever read.

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It indeed has quite the few loopholes and the fact that women just throw themselves at him is also distasteful but Im very interested on what's gonna happen to him once his inside the foundation so I still wish for the author to continue this.Its good for readers that just read to chill but if you want to read something with more proper character building then this is not for you.I still wanna see more though!!! Im highly interested in anything related to the SCP Foundation!! So author pls continue this!

Wonderful novel. Gripping and paced narration  is maintained till the end.

I really like how the story is told for now, and the grammar is good too. Less than ten characters have appeared so far, but I feel that this is going to be the kind of story without many 2D characters, but with more 3D characters and not so cartoonish. I could feel it through the dialogues and the way the characters express themselves in some situations.Of course, I can't stop talking about the protagonist, who for me is one of the highlights of the story so far. He is ironic, serious, intelligent, mischievous and, above all, a great character.Thanks to all this, this story deserves 5 stars (and my first review).

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It is a really cool book. I can not wait to see how Persey and Teris's romance goes. He seems sorta prickly though but cool enough. Still on it.

Wow... truly fabulous.. its a roller coaster of journey of some beautiful ladies.. loved the way u wrote it.. keep going!! Loved the characters and the amazing plot!!

I like this novel very much . I think the story is fast but it is also good. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???????????????????????????

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Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity.Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really.Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.

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