Sold To The Mafia ( Original Version ) - Reviews

F***k with this 140chara....... HahahahahahahahaGood job author, make this novel see "the end",.............................................

Author is a decent storyteller but the system concept is stupid. System asks MC to spend money or certain treasures. But the treasure comes from the system. All the MC needs to do is give it away in a given time duration. And the plot armor guarantees that the resources the MC have is what the clan or the situation requires urgently. No effort at all. Then he gets rewarded with system point to spend on OP skills or equipment.

Sorry dude but I gotta say it, the title says detained for greatness which makes it sound like the hero is imprisoned, don't you mean destined for greatness? Sorry it was bothering me and I had to point it out. Still great story, keep up the great work.

here is a review .......................

"Unfortunately no one will die today heretic"

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''As you ordered '' replied Edward

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But then,

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