Solar Eclipse Shadow - Reviews

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now im writing this review because the other people i have seen reviewing this are either butt hurt people cause their novel didn't get chosen or people who gives 5 star for some small reason i read most of the reviews but i haven't seen one that actually analyses the novel so ill do that.So first offTranslation quality is 4,7 stars out of 5This is mainly because of the fact that there are practically no grammar mistakes and the transitions are smooth enough said.Stability of updates 4,5 out of 5since this hasn't come to web novel yet i cant expect much from it will probably upload a massive amount of chapter at first then slow down to 1 chapter a day or so and i cant really judge it so it will get a 4.5 from my expectations.Story development 2.8 out of 5While it is an interesting story it has the feeling of many other novels that i have read that are interesting in the beginning and repetitive in the end not to mention there are a lot of cliches in this novel like a system, being a nice guy and unnaturally becoming loyal when they previously wanted to kill that guy.And to tell the truth it feels like hes bound to the world by the things the previous owner did i dont see a reason for him to rescue his disciple that betrayed him and i dont understand how that could offend the main character so the reasons are vague for what he does or why he does things these ways. Character design 3 out of 5 starsThey are average but as i stated before they have unnaturally changed their personality from deadly psychos to loyal somewhat good dogs in around 1 or 2 months considering they have lived for at least a 100 years im surprised they could change that much by some major benefitThe only other reason that can explain their personality changing that much is that they are acting cause they think their master can see everything but from their thought process that we are shown that is not very likely.World background 3.2 out of 5It hasn't been developed much they practically put out some sect names witch the only ones of importance are nether sect heavenly something and clarity sect, after that they put out some cultivating rank thingy yet the only thing i remember are divine court something and eight Brahma something they haven't explained  **** and i cant understand why they have done so.My personal opinion of this novel is that it is quite good but its not 5 star nor is it one star if this is you first read it  i suggest you try it but if you are tired from cliches such as system Mc walking into traps that he could avoid if he was a bit more cold then dont do this novel the only good point is that i haven't seen a young master but considering his position i dont think a young master would dare trouble him.oh one more thing i dont think there will be romance so if you dont like that you should also try this novel for the people i talked about in the beginning im not trying to offend you by saying that you are butt hurt but im trying to say that its very childish to leave a review yet not having read the book same goes for keep up the good work 5 stars review im starting to have serious trust issues because of you reviews witch are made after reading some pages and being like wow i like this novel lets put some 5 star reviews i dont know what happens later in the story but i like this novel and i dont know how to judge a book so ill just say some word to fill in the word count.so ill end with this dont review a book without judging the book from all the point you've seen like translation character story dont just go for your personal opinion judge it from an objective position and see the logical false things and point that out since that will help a story much more than some 5 star or 1 star reviews.

I am probably just bias because I love all of IET  works. Simply because I am not reading a novel about some guy who has 50 billion women he finds randomly and then we have to waste half a chapter describing how beautiful they are. I simply read these novels for broken OP characters that have a goal in mind and try to accomplish that goal. One of my favourite novels is DE. And I haven't found a IET novel I don't like they just bring you to a nice place....Though the endings are always a negative but overall I always enjoy the story until the end. Unlike most novels which are...well...not that good. No constant face slapping moments nor the need to drag conversations on with mindless villains because of word count which is why I always enjoy IET and DD novels. If you enjoy good fighting novels which vast world to explore come read an IET novel....Just be weary of the last 20%....Might become rushed....Why CD...WHY!

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I like it so much...the author is the best i give it 5 star the characters are so amazing and you can stop reading it so what are you waiting for read it now

Its clearly mtl with little to no edits. I really love the story, i read the first 30 chaps on another site with proper translatiom and came here to try and finish it. But everytime i just can t bring myself to read mtl man, its such a brain killer for me i just can t stand it?. Yeah my review is :-story is really good, if you can read mtl read it its very entertaining-if you can t read mtl then don t bother( im giving 4.6 starts becauE the story really deserves it even tho i can t continue because of mtl ??)

This is perhaps one of the best written stories on this site where... surprise!!! ... the main character is not a violent apathetic murderer. He's killed only a couple humans at this point in time. The entire point of the magic system seems to be well-designed and at least somewhat thought out. I enjoy the fact that he's a space mage because I also can't necessarily think of op applications of his power which leaves less plotholes. I'll admit it's less dramatic than most things you'll find here but I find it's more realistic when it is dramatic, with a more subtle tone to it. I have to say I'm incredibly impressed by this story and writing even though I see toxic comments complaining on almost every chapter. I especially enjoy these recent story lines where the main character is researching in a reasonable fashion.I do however, have one complaint. The main character, before being reborn, finished an applied maths degree. One line in particular bugs me, when he's surprised that maths have applications. Like what the hell did he study if not that. Outside of the fact that I have the perspective of a mathematician, I quite enjoyed this novel and the writing.

To: AuthorThe concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointingThe main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could sayAnd of course the Slight but annoying grammar errorsI’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing

Wow. Name changes every chapter. The MC sometimes acts like a transmigrant, sometimes a native. Some sentences wholly make no sense. Translations sucks, and MC doesn’t even know if the original body of his actually committed the crime.

It's me the author. Looks how pathetic I'm write the review to myself. Well I just to make the review, so problaly someone can read it. You know probably my chance story to show up on your screen become bigger.By  Author.

Very detailed and i remember most parts cuz i watched the untamed, i think the person who wrote this knew what they were doing for sure oh my lol