interesting storyline which i'm quite sure will attract more readers of supernatural novels. just needs some proofreading in the blurb and narration in the chapters to get rid of tense switches and typo issues. all in all, nice story!
Recent chapters is getting better. Pls get Odell and Sylvia as one, very much in love. I dont mind reading more chapters, as long as they are together fighting mean people. Dont let them separate again, and let them trust each other all the time.
