Alright then here we go after reading 10 chaps in. The novel has a unique story with an interesting lore of the Gods, definitely a more traditional-driven fantasy but it is quite enjoyable. The dialogues of the characters and their actions shape their personalities quite well, each character is easily distinguishable from the next. However, I advise the author to use more connecting words or conjunctions. The novel doesn't seem to flow very well with single short sentences that appear detached from each other. A few minor grammar errors here and there but it does not disrupt the overall appeal of the story. But I do strongly advise to look into linking the sentences to each other as when reading, it appeared that each sentence was a new single thought that had no relation to the other. That is the only issue that is hindering the potential greatness of the novel. Overall it is a wonderful read! best of luck to the author !