Slaves of fate - Reviews

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All right I just read the first 40 chapters and all I can say is wow that’s novel is very bad the writing is sixth grade at best, the overall flow makes no sense, as well it’s full of the troubles we’ve come to hate. Please don’t let this not go through I’m gonna do the next 20 but probably won’t reveal.ufffc

Surprisingly one of top 10 of novels I have read.                                                                                             

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Translation quality is very poor ruining what could be one of the top stories on QI.   For the most part the translation is overly verbose which detracts from the story.    MTL translations of the first chapter read better than the QI. Even the synopsis has glaring errors that have yet to be resolved: Moons wax and wane!   While it may seem alright to use Moon wanes and grows it's ridiculous to partially use the correct terms in a sentence. Attempts  to politely point out problems with the synopsis and initial chapters have been met with silence hence this post.

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That storeroom had three big barrels with a tap and dozens of smaller ones alongside with a wooden chair and small table. When started investigating the source of blood lust we found a secret passage behind one of the big barrels. After entering the hidden room we found a small room with a wardrobe table few chairs letters alongside the dagger and a interesting crest hanging on the wall.

"Really? So, how is it? Did you join the other network too? Earning experience not only in one show will helps you grow more. Try the Haute show and VS," Lapeetah lamented.

"Lucky for us he has two children one male the other female, both around the same age as you two. You will be given undercover identities, you will be going in with two FBI agents, as their children, how you both assimilate yourselves into the community is your problem... All you'll get is a piece of paper, that tells you of your undercover identities, and you must follow orders." explained the uncle.

Mary looked taken aback before she smiled again and replied. "You must know that you are a noble and must not stoop to such dirty work. You won't need to make any money with how much we have."

I froze and looked at My bestfriend who fucked the whole school before in high school, and never been seen with a girl no more than let's say 2 days... nah not even a whole 24 hours.