Ok coming from someone that does not really enjoy school novels this is honestly pretty good. The character building is pretty good you know everybody has there own unique personality and motives and he remembers that throughout the story.The world building is also great there is a bunch of different countries with different species of intelligent creatures somewhat coexisting with humans. If you don't really like school novels like me I ask you at least give it a chance.
This novel is bloody awesome webnovel better not drop this beauty please let it go on forever and ever. Thats all I am gonna say . what else could I say
I've never been impressed until I read this author's excellent plot on top. I was hooked the minute I started perusing the lines of the story. Guys, it's a great read to entertain your eyes, Worth reading!
It’s not worth it. There is no plot. 40 chapters, and there is not a lot of story progression.The author focuses too much on trying to world build by telling (not showing) us the history of things that have happened.They do not focus on the characers.Speaking on the characters, the real main character appears to be Anna as the author spends most of their time with her and her perspective. Which would be fine if the synopsis or initial part of the story sold it as such. No, it feels like it was switched on you halfway through.I read despite the terrible writing quality that only gets slightly better after chapter 11. Even though the story has great promise, I realized its not worth my time. And I am reading the free chapters. If I had to unlock chapters to read more world building with no story progression or about their tribe hunting… would not happen.There is no kingdom building when I stopped reading.
Good story so far. It has some key features, but by the story came so far I can think what would be the end. Even though this might be a personal preference, but i think it will be great if the ending wasnt expected by the reader. But its just one idea. I dont have much experience in writing. So keep up the good work. Looking foward to read the full story.
Jolie histoire, je ne sais pas pour les autres moi j’aime bien le fait tu n‘es pas rentré directement dans le vif du sujet, j’aime bien prendre mon temps de comprendre et de voir où l’on va. J’écris en français parce que j’ai constaté que le français est votre langue maternelle. Et oui il y a certaines erreurs et fautes de frappes mais cela ne rend pas médiocre ton travail pour autant. Continue et je constate que tu t’améliores aussi au fur et à mesure. El Howie les jumeaux sont exceptionnels et il y a leur ami la que j’aime bien mais le nom m’a échappé. Celui qui parle beaucoup et qui se fout pas mal de qui sont ses amis. Bonne chance
I was kinda enjoying the novel when Wutian—the Protagonist—was living in the woods, nursing a desire for revenge and having fun with Little Tian, his slimy faux toad. Bringing the little girl into the story was a mistake. Bringing her along was a mistake. The MC's total inability to keep a low profile has began to be a big drag…Still, I will continue to read on for at least a while longer—to see how things turn out...
Others would attribute her efforts to luck of finding many special spirit herbs and fruits to boost her cultivation but she ignored those people and remained proud of her achievements.
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