Silence forever - Reviews

Hello! I've started your novel for a while and I pretty much like it! I'm a huge fan of zombie stories and I can't find a fix since TWD in the comicbook version ended for a while before. Most of the things here have OP powers and would move away from what I prefer.This thing is the closest thing I could find that is next to the one I like! Thanks for this! I'll give another review when I catch up!

feels boring now already there are many badly executed farm novels here smh ...........................................mmmmmmmmwmmm m m

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I see nothing wrong with the story. the story progression is not to slow or fast. the world building is amazing along with the character development of the vampires.

They see a sign saying: If you want to continue on and survive, you will need to unlock aura. - Way Neo.

Hayato nods and says " Ok "

He muttered to himself for a while before telling his daughter to bring the baby in. Once inside the man started checking through the books on his shelves. "I've never seen a purple and crimson child before it seems to be a mutated child but even so who would drop off a child at my doorstep even if it was unwanted?" The little girl piped up "Daddy can we keep him? I've always wanted a little brother" The man looked at his daughter before sighing "I can't say no to you princess" the little girl beamed before asking "what's his name?" The man looked down at the card which only read "Please treat Lucius well I can only ask you this as I no longer have the ability" he pictured a poor dragon struggling to provide food and sighed before saying "He's called Lucius and as of now he is part of our Deepheart family so he will be your younger brother from today forth" the girl smiled before going over to the bundle and said "Hello little bro Lucius, I'm your big sis Kara and I'll be looking after you from now on." The tiny face of the baby dragon smiled looking at the little girl before saying "A-r-a"

She bit down her lower lip to shift her thoughts. Soon her lips started bleeding.

"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE, MONGREL" said Lust now noticing Thor.

[?]-"I see you failing....the chances of your success are 0.01%.  You will assuredly die a painful death by her hands."

Skuy

I am not into game novels , but this once is catchy from the start .The detailed description about the ML and his two friends are interesting and make me immerse in the story also the plot that will unfold seems intrigue. I am going to read it whole ! So far is a good novel , with a great writing style, simple and efficient, also has great vocabulary . Keep up the good work !