English is not my mother languaje but here we go, i hope its readable.This is a novel that could have gone big, but became bad.The world in itself seems interesting but...I can understand that you want to make an OP mc. Okey good, but if you do it, do it with logic. Make a progression so the readers can enjoy how he gets OP. The way is done here is too fast, no development at old. Feels rushed.Many cliches used in a bad way, it feels forced and boring.The mc is supposed to be reincarnated from an old man, i cant feel any maturity in his way of thinking.Even with all this issues i congratulate the author for keep going with the novel.Its not my cup but if you enjoy it keep going.