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Shy Succubus
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Starting from Fan Clan arc or close to it author or translator loses his or her english and creates  their own language writing wasn't perfect to begin with but since the Long Clan and Fan Clan arc it hit the all time low. Feels like author was lazy to construct a sentence just and threw some random words to fill in
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Shameless? Hahahaha I imagine Ye Qiu living in a magical world in real life. And assuming hi Battle Mage Status and fights multiple guilds and using shameless tactics to beat his opponents
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Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
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What a cheap copy of THE AUTHOR'S POV. Though not exactly the same but almost the same. There is no flow in the story, the writing is messed up, although I liked reading it, something about this story doesn't allow me to give it 5 stars or 4 stars.
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The storyline is unique and good, but the imprecise and lengthy writing sometimes leaves readers confused. The character portrayal is not in-depth enough, but chapter 1 is interesting to read and needs improvement in the writing. Keep up the good work author!
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It was neat ?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️ The synopsis will make you curious about what will happen and when you read it you'll wonder why the monster was in the sunset stables. I wonder what will the MC do ?? anyways, great start author ?
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Mc is just a tool man. The witches around don't seem to care much about him other than the power he can give them and just treat him like a servant. Always just demanding things from him and ordering him around like an errand boy. He seems fine with that because he gets to be with two beautiful witches. Nothing really has happened so far into the story though. The system is just a status screen until now, I guess. Title says inheritor of magic, but I don't even know what he actually inherited. Maybe the status screen is the magic he inherited?
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With that,the Rare weapon was a Katana,with its stats being quite nice,which will allow me to be one of the strongest in the beginning of the game.
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A son named Bharat was born from Kaikeyi; and from Sumitra, who had received two portions of ambrosia, were born twin sons, Lakshmana and Shatrughna. These three boys resembled celestials and seemed to blaze in their splendour. In the heavens, kettledrums resounded and showers of flowers fell upon the earth. Ayodhya was rejoicing so the streets quickly became crowded with parades. King Dasarath, overwhelmed with happiness, arranged for a grand feast to be distributed to his entire kingdom. Vasishtha joyfully performed the name-giving ceremony for the brothers. Of all four boys, Rama was especially glorious. His attractive body had the hue of a celestial diamond. Dressed in the finest silk and adorned with golden ornaments, they captured the mind of all who saw them. They were devoted to their father's service. Rama took delight in the science of archery and quickly mastered horseback and the art of elephant riding, as well as the various methods of driving a chariot.
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"Dia sudah pergi." Sehun menatap hyungnya diam. "baru saja, dokter mencabut alat ditubuhnya." kata-kata itu mengalir ditelinganya tanpa sempat ia cerna. "sajangnim yang memintanya." tubuh Sehun merosot kelantai. "Sehun-a.."
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"I usually go up their too. I never see you there though." I looked over at him as he clumsily picked up his chopsticks.
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"What! Why am I here!"

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