Short horror stories. - Reviews

fucking disgusting shit like the mc has experience and sometime he is soo smart like he could be business tycoon but there are times he is fucking dumb super dumb like i want beat the author ,.........

This book makes my stomach hurt from laughing ??I hope this continues to be a fun read.Thank the author !!

Another small pet peeve I have is the usage of vocabulary. Vocab could be a very minor thing for some, but for this instance it bothered me a lot. It was the usage of the words "hot shot". It's a modern word the MC specifically uses in this fantasy setting to describe characters that have cheats and could be protagonists of other stories. He teaches this word to his disciples. Cool, nothing wrong with that, but then another character, completely unrelated to the MC, who has never interacted with the MC suddenly uses the word "hot shot" also to describe these characters. ???? When there is no cohesion of the world, even in something as minor as this, it breaks the immersion.

What? I thought it was in the rejected pile? Maybe because of CN success? Well I'm following the latest CN so don't really care but might be fun to reread the earlier arcs again.ps: If the system female gift offended you, it's better to not continue. There will be similar situations, not to mention borderline brain control curses & 'furnace'(idk how the translator will translate this) training arts, etc. Ofc the MC is always innocent, either controlled by the system, to save the girls life or to save his own like by controlling enemy, etc.

This is good story, but it is little bit too fast paced for me. I think the game introduction fell short, since the start was just too fast paced that in my opinion skipped a lot stuff, so early info dumps could have been avoided, by making MC do more ingame stuff which would have let us find out about the world with the eyes of MC, otherwise good story and I like the writing quality, but slow down the pace and it will be even better one.

Wow ! This is so hype ! I love the way you introduce you characters they have different backgrounds I am so gonna love this , I will definitely recommend this to everyone?

Dengan terpaksa Mr. K akhirnya mengambil tangan pria paruh baya itu, untuk membantunya berdiri.

Kataku salah hati

{Phase 2 , Evolution of all other species , systems unlocked}

Upon closer inspection, the Bael's eyes widened and his jaw dropped at the sudden realization.

"Coming, grandpa"

The pros:The story is a very pleasant easy read with good writing style. I kept on reading chapters after chapters.The main character is an endearing somewhat impulsive but well intentioned girl. She doesn't act like an all knowing MC, nor does act stupid, it's just right!Also, there are lots of mysteries. Lots of foreshadowing as well that gives the reader a good chance to make a few guess many chapter in advance, some of them will be right! :) Each chapter is very long (like 3 or 4 "standard royal road" chapter, with many different scenes in it), and much action is happening, doesn't feel drawn out, unlike many other stories here on RR and despite chapter size.The cons:There lots of flashback and scene transition that are abrupt and somewhat confusing.Suspension of disbelief. This story will stretch it quite a lot!For example, the story has many unbelievable plot holes, I am not talking about super power and the like, the premise of such story. Instead, for instance, in Oleander - the main city in that story - there are like about 10 to 20 heroes and villains alike and they have been on status quo for quite a while. Neither winning or losing members, despite some super being extremely more powerful than others. The first 3 super fight Hope is in, one side is clearly the winner, but an unexpected lucky twist let the loser escape. Like every single fight. While it might be a staple of superhero stories to have the same actors in many episodes in a row, this is quite hard to believe here.Another example. Heroes do not kill. The story feels strongly about that. Meanwhile the villains are killing like hundreds of civilians per minutes. But that's fine, we can't fault nor terminate them for that hey?