She's That Unfathomable (TRUTHS UNFOLD) - Reviews

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The premise of the story is great, the translation is also very grammatically correct and good. But I think that the MC is a bit too arrogant and easily swayed. The story also doesn't give us a good background of the characters and everything is just normal and boring. There's not much describing the people and places. He doesn't use his system to it's full capacity and wastes him time playing with pretty girls and beating people up. He doesn't have much ambition despite having the system. He only wants money and stuff to make his parents proud. All the other characters are all the same, a few pretty girls, and a bunch of people who don't believe in him. The world design is average and the story gets a bit boring.

Me: ''Yoo brudda you have a lil rad story you got there, am lovin it and you know it!! but i lil bit of chapters would be SOO cool of ya bruh''

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Great story and I love it very reliant on source material

It’s……. Not for me. But all the best author…. **and i skipped chap 27 too. Tee hee hee**

Thud!

I gasped. He is so strong. Soon he slammed onto me. Forgetting it was my first. "It... It hurts---" tears soon builded up my eyes."It won't hurt again my love...It won't be long there. Trust me" He said as he let me adjust.

"Where am I?"

There was a long and tense pause before Armin let out a sigh. "I hope so. Sometimes he has his own way of expressing things." The boy continued. "Rogue?"

Is it really that funny?! I felt the heat rising to my cheeks.. ah... so embarrassing. I hate you grandpa.

(Pagpapakalma ni thomas)