She's Mine [COMPLETE] - Reviews

Does any one have the link to the raws for this?

Its translated by endlessfantasy translations, I don't think I need to add more to this review with their reputation. Never read anything by this translation group, it's all MTL with zero editing. In 13 chapters, we know nothing about the MC or his background other than his name. Side characters are just there to exist to kill or use. Story development: There's a story? If I could give a 0 rating I would.World Background: Cultivation is a game I think but also real life. I don't know, this novel makes no sense.

Its a generic cultivation novel, lots of random killing, bad characters, plot points don't go anywhere or are forgotten. generic cultivation world and stupid mc.I mean he's from earth and went to that world, it's never mentioned again. His character doesnt suit someone from earth, gets to killing everyone very quickly without hesitation, acts like other cultivation MC's, stupid and arrogant.Every new character its just another, oh a debt let me go kill a bunch of people and collect it, repeat forever.It's not a new concept, the storyline is basically non existent the world building is non existent and horribly told. The villians are one dimensional. Everyones a basic copy and paste villain.Honestly is such a low quality novel, what can you expect from a chinese cultivation novel. Theres only a few 'good' ones and the rest are just bad copy's.In fact this entire novel idea is ripped off another novel with a similar story.My recomendation is avoid.

How to say it?Redo of Heler in Zombie Apocalypse.With generic r*** MC.

For a brief moment, her mind reflected on the way he kissed her. Her lips puckered as she tried to imitate the way he had previous suckled and nipped at hers. She ran her tongue along the inside of her mouth, desperately trying to duplicate the experience. She had never kissed a man before, except him, so the idea of trying to do was completely foreign to her.

She managed to make a pitiful smile as she took one of Haeji's hand and held it gently.

Oh damn, she's right. I don't know what I'm doing!

"What you needed right now is going through this darkness and move forward, don't let this incident make you lost your spirit" the Boy didn't know how to help Lucas, But, He can only help Lucas by giving his advice.

"With your mouth?" Rock growled.

Whatever the Colonel's failings as an officer, and in Ian's opinion they were many, he would not speak ill of the dead.

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb