Shattered Skies: The Echo Call - Reviews

I expect a good story out of this one. At the very least, the characters must not be ****** idiots who do nothing but spout out arrogant words, while looking down on the MC only to get face-slapped or killed by MC later on. Frankly speaking, I am fed up with all those repetitions. I don't know why there are so many fans for these kind of 'idiotic' cultivations novels. Perhaps most of their readers are just underaged kids or adults with childish minds? All they expect from the story is how the op MC will cultivate, kill, face-slap, cultivate more, kill more, face-slap more... In other words, Zero character development, Bird-brained side characters, and Enemies with mental defects.

Hey, guys, Author here!So, what should you expect from this story? I will start by going through the five main criteria of a good story.1. Writing Quality: My writing quality is something that was developed through experience. It's nothing short of superb. Of course, there are a few typos here and there. If you spot one, please tell me (You get 5,000 coins as a reward...not from me though. lol)2. Stability of Update: You are guaranteed 8+ chapters. That is the bare minimum. My actual update rate is between 10 -14 weekly chapters3. Story Development: I actually concentrated more on the story. It is neither fast-paced nor slow-paced. Time jumps exist, but only when necessary. If you are reading this, I ask that you persevere through the first 50+ chapters. They are required in building the foundation of the novels. You will come across lots of hidden plot points(some, I dare say, you won't recognize) and enjoyable arcs. Character Design: What else is there to say? We have the absolutely hateful/loving Seth. We have our dear tsun Kayne. The female MVP Raina and many more. Each of my characters has a story to be unveiled. World Background: If you have read my previous works, you know I'm a sucker for world-building. That's why the first 50+ chapters are essential. They implement the feeling of immersion in the hearts of my readers. Realm of Lore is a wonderful work. Sure, it might not be your cup of tea. But if you want an almost realistic VR novel, then you are in the right place.Also, what I'm most proud of is the vampire aspect of Seth. I'm confident you will see what I'm talking about[PS: All critiques are welcomed. Do not use abusive words and please, no hate reviews. Remember to vote regularly. Drop a review when you feel free. Join my discord.. lol, I'm out of words.]Bye !!

Now, my stick is by no means sharp but using the muscles I've gained from wavering my 640 gram stick around I start  jabbing at the underbelly. To provide a better mental image the momentum of my sprint and slide carries me under, I'm lying flat on the ground, and my stick is being thrust continuously at the soft underbelly.

"Yeah yeah no problem. I - *cough* - It's normal, I'm always like that when I get too excited. But seriously guys and girls! As I can see from your attitude when listening, you just don't understand how amazing this is! Humph! If those people could cultivate without their evil soul ... just imagine what would happen if they were to cultivate with both of them! At that time they would no longer be simple cultivators but Du-"

" Do you understand Old man, my ability can't be measured and only revered. This is my great magic Sunshine ".

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♡ Yoona Pov

-Is that the only thing, you know what to say? -Selis was angry at the anrur -It can't be done?. You tought no one could corner you on your territory, yet here we are.

baru saja beradu argurmen. Tak lama, mereka melewati sebuah areal

"Gohan...I do hope that you will be sparring with me as well...not like I have many beings that can make me use all one hundred percent of my power...HAHAHA!" Tanine laughed hysterically while gaining some surprised looks from the others.

Hi there fans! I hope that you enjoy all the young adult adventures in the story. May the growth of the characters encourage you too! Please leave your comments.?

Good book got me read it. Knowledge is key to understanding.