Nice story. I really enjoy it. No too much complication that makes you hate the ml or fl. the plot is on point from beginning to end, I read all chapters without skipping any. Wonderful job author.
MLB actually baited us into thinking he's finally gon show some love to DC instead of focusing on that CO bulls*it.
God how I hate it when writers get influenced by mainstream...
I felt like I was watching one of those pretty romance movies, curried with some violence and suffering. Your use of stylistic and thematic devices is so amazing. Thumbs up. Continue writing.
