Shadows of the Forgotten Heiress - Reviews

Petrov-Wright and Steel Stories are all STANDALONE but for a better understanding of the sequence of events, people, and timeline. 1. The CEO's Ten Million Dollar Wife  2. Vasili, Not A Mafia Boss 3. I Know How You Taste, Mr. CEO 4. It Started With the Hickeys 5. I Paid A Billionaire for a Hook up

This is just frustrating to read. First, all of the character names are mismatches of someone google searching "top 20 American first names" and "top 20 American last names". It is super frustrating to read when every single character has a name that I would expect to see as a place holder on a police report involving minors. Second is that it absurdly draws out conflicts. It is a constant seesaw between the MC getting harassed and then getting some form of minor revenge. There is also an absurd focus on side characters, even their POVs, considering we can be sure they aren't going to play any major role outside of the current conflict they are involved in with the MC. Speaking of conflict, this is another majorly frustrating aspect. The MC is described as a hardworking, kind, and loyal man. The entire novel is just him being defecated on repeatedly.

"Are there descriptive battles or a relatively decent introduction to modern weapons? And above all, in which chapter do planes, tanks or whatever appear? I've read novels that are about technology, but only the first 40 chapters, after that it's pure magic or cultivation even though the novel is supposedly about something "technological"

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my prognosis is to leave this novel alone, the synopsis is a straight up lie and the storytelling is bland and forced. the content to him getting his power up is skipped, his first loss is skipped. the storytelling principle of show dont tell is simply ignored. small spoiler-> rough plot directionthe female lead is shoved to the mcs arms almost instantly, without any real content except her having a system which forces her to give herself to him against her own will. this seems like a not so much thought out power fantasy.i do have to say that the synopsis really sounded exciting, so this is a huge disappointment...

Author-san I believe in u! please give us more Chapters? The sorry us so good and is building up for something great, I understand life gets in he way but please don't leave us waiting for long ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Absolutely amazing.The author has done an amazing job all round so far, and i do hope this level of writing continues as the book progresses.Excellent writing quality. No grammatical errors I could see and the selection of words used made the story seem very free flowing.It's too early to judge story development, but from what I've read so far, it's clear it has massive potential.The characters are easy to follow and written well, each unique and we'll suited to the roles the author has set out for them.And the world background. Very well crafted world and understanding how it works has been made very easy thanks to the author. Keep up the good work.

Hey Author, when you live and read this. Please write more from your Story here. It is a great story and fun to read and i crave for more. A concise and stable story with great worldbuilding is great.

As Rai Approached he smelt something what he thought was charcoal. As he was approaching(*Loudly*)he tripped on something and as he was falling he heard a whimper of somekind, theeeen... he hit his face on the cold hard ground (*And didn't die somehow...he's still three*).

"You're satisfied with my love and I want to thank you for that." His right hand cupped my left cheek. "May I go now?"

"Apa - apaan Jaehyun! Sangat tidak bertanggungjawab setelah membuatku mati penasaran atas ucapannya tadi!" batin Aya menggerutu.