Shadows of Severance - Reviews

This book is one of the best am reading currently, nice world development....amazing MC for a ten year old...looking forward to more chapter and hope for a faster release

The story is quite bland and the characters(main character included) feel like a bunch of side characters that is introduced and killed in the same chapter from other generic stories, they just do stuff without any reason or emotions.Some events happen without indication or reason, at some parts the writing is soo bad that you literally don't understand what is happening, it's like the author just put some ideas and concepts in a bowl and picked some  at random.

As I've said in our forum. Another quality gem for Historical Fiction lovers who enjoy stories such as Downton Abbey and other English greats.The characters are distinct and each story has their own flavour and quirks as per the perspective its being told through.It has definitely been a refreshing read for me. A variety to this site.It needs to be featured.

So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this... My rating overall is about 3.8The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way.Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts.He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character..Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess...Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience? This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more.Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.

its good to read, i love the phasing of each event, the character of the story is really exciting, i want to read more, i wish more chapter please

I LOVE TO READ THIS STORY ? THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY WRITTEN VERY WELL ❤️u200d?❤️u200d?

Interesting theme of magic and science. Now like Star Wars and Jedi. Good good good Hope its free to read, Good luck to your novel author. Bye. bye.

Finally, Eamon turned to the young man in the middle with fierce gaze.

John woke up in the brink of dawn and ate some of the berries he found yesterday. The berries did not taste good ate all but  food is food john thought. John want to go look for survivors if there was any one else to he grabbed what he needed[hatchet,first aid kit]. Also he put some berries in his pocket for later and started to walk down the side of the forest. Wile he was walking he saw a lot of small peaces of metal on the ground. Then he started to see a mountain and a peak of what look like a building, so he wanted to see what it was and started to walk towards it. John started to get a feeling that some one was watching he thought the forest. John thought it was just a animal or paranoia, so he just brush off the feeling and kept walk toward the building looking structure. Then john was annoy of the feeling and walk around to find if some thing was watching him. He was now starting to hear laughing and rushing leaves form the tree.John now was very scared and started to run towards the structure he saw.

Is there a way to delete the novel?

Honestly, Namjoon was having fun with this situation. It was fun to terrorize their little Kookie a little bit. Plus, in the end it would probably make the maknae faster, and therefore make the wait for a shower faster too.

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