Shadows of Avalon - Reviews

Good very interesting, the spelling could use a little work though as the character names keep changing

The story after Ch117 stops making sense. There are too many gaps, name, and pet changes without explanation. Some name changes may be related to translation errors, Shen Miao to Shen Yi.

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The start of the book is amazing. It has a touch of mystery, and the writing makes you willing to be immersed in the world of the book. As Dory says, Just keep swimming, in the plot of the book. A very interesting read! I will be reading daily till I finish the chapters.

"He's like our big brother Elsa and I know that you are frustrated because he rejected your offer and nevertheless came to the trip and I also know that's the reason you were gonna to give him wrong direction".

glacier: a shop or cafe selling ice cream.

A glint of regret.

And we could all use a little change

Aya: SO CUTE! SO FLUFFY! SO UNFAIR! WHY DID I BECOME A NINJA WHEN SOMETHING SO CUTE EXISTS!?

Pretty good concept and well written at the start however I feel it quickly becomes a book parodying other books. More specificly the lord of the rings arc, I found I could skip multiple chapters and still carry on as if I read them all. The book became what the other characters were doing about Sauron more than what the MC was doing at all. Adding into the fact it was following the actual books story line made it feel like there was no point in me reading it for the occasional OC character complaint here and there. I stopped reading around here to review the book, I’ll give it another read when there are more chapters.