Shadow of the careless king - Reviews

This book is so amazing I highly recommend it if u want something different and intriguing

Basic anti Japanese novel by Chinese And the mc is a full blown retard he acts like a 8 yr old when he’s Supposedly 10000 yrs old+.         

this novel os one of the better ones out there. the mc is somewhat smart and cautious and values brotherhood. the cultivation world seems interesting(as of yet not a lot of info is given on it) i have high hopes for this but the golden finger is so op i feel the author would nerf it down halfway or make the mc dumb (hope that doesn't happen).

if you mind: "oh that's interesting"! yeah, but even your start reading first 10 chapters. Just author type more about how feel and how not so cool MC and he good that, but in moment i hate woh much him like idiot, MC is very difficult. sorry author but i critical hate how your positing MC. just writing easy not so hard demotivated your character his not so fkng stupid MC him not need to up for story, he easy because u write how powerful him. uhh...im so angry why I'm reading so much ((

Not that a synopsis can be trusted, but I do see some potential at least to the start. It is enough to get me to look into this. As long as this doesn't fizzle out after the first 60 to 80 chapters...

respect +5 for making magic in english, not chinese XD.........................................................................////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

The author here with a totally biased reviewI've wanted to start consistently writing a story for a while now, so I'm trying to use this as a way to motivate me to not only write more but also improve on things such as grammar and style.I'll be trying to get this story posted at least once a week and with a goal of 1000 words for a page from now on.So thanks to those who stick around to see me fling myself at writing and hope I hit a bullseye.

                           He returned back to the clan and pretended nothing happened. Shin Feng lingered in his mind but he was useless. He clenched his fist in anger. He never let anyone see it though

  "Yes. I'm sorry, Taitsuke." She ruffles my hair. Her apology makes me feel even worse. 'If she apologizes, who am I supposed to direct my angst to?' Her hands are covered in an unfamiliar white Chi. My eyelids start to be heavy. 'I feel.. tired."

Bhumi was surprised and asked him, "Who cut these fruits? Did you cut them?"

Unlike the house-elves in Slytherin's common room, Reed has no prejudice of me being a muggle. It's probably because, he served below the castle for his entire life while those house-elves had served a long line of pureblood students.

Ithron stretched out his right arm and touched the crystal with his fingers. It was warm.