Shadow of Terror - Reviews

Another hidden gem, uploaded silently. Let's see if it goes unnoticed. For those interested, is a faceslap novel, the MC is basically an OP sheltered young lord but ignorant of the outside world, wich makes him decided scape and roamed the world meeting possible followers, slapping the face of the disrespectful and being domineering when the situation is needed so it's funny and entertaining... good for those that enjoyed LoHP, Absolute Teacher, and so.

Good story with good character but there are, in my opinion, two major problem: the first one is just the fact that, for me, some description are sometime too long like the one when all the most powerful NPC met to see if everyone has a student. But the biggest problem I have with this story isn't just in this one bit in lot of others too, it's about the future rival in love you spoke about. In all the LN the MC needs to fight against problem, he needs to resolve problems but in novels like this one where love is a really important part I think that making the relation growing steadily without too much external elements can be better because introducing a love rival will just be unpleasant and uncomfortable to see because even if its just a story when you see how much the MC loves Amanda, making him suffer (in the future) with a rival is just sadistic so I think that if you have a bit of empathy for the MC when you read a novel I just advise you to search for another LN because this one is great but in the future it might become unpleasant and the fact that we might need to wait between two chapters at crucial time could be really unpleasant. I might be overthinking but it's just my opinion. But overall it's well written.

really good novel !!                                                                                                                     

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"I look away from you for one hour and you end up like this? There's no need for such a useless disciple. Come, let us clean you up before I knock some sense into that thick skull of yours."

Daryl: It`s a guild that I have made just this day.

"Well the ground doesn't seem too clear Teva..." started Teja.

Damn you, Azaria. Stop acting like this.

Napaisip na naman ako. "Bakit ho? Meron pa ho ba?"

"Why didn't you say anything about this?!"

Poke

    So years went by was doing good in his studies too, was an average student and his parents were happy with him that he was doing ok and as he was growing he got influenced by his friends as he was not satisfied with his life and he was not satisfied with his dad because he did not let jack play games coz he thought he would get into bad infuence so he was upset with that thinf and started to do things that his dad was scared that his son would do if he joined the games. So jack thought about it for days as he could'nt sleep at migjht thinking about those stupid things and thought  of starting to smoke ,do drugs,to prove his dad that its all about mindset and it would also depend upon his son ,jack thought about his dad doing so because he cared about his son but it proved so that he did'nt trust his son too.So he kept  on doing drugs from grade 6 and s he reached grade 9 he was too hooked in it and he had started to do it in his home too so one day his mom caught him doing it red handed and she started to cry thinking that her son is useless now but though she trusted her son so much that she did'nt even think about putting her son to a reahab centre coz she even had faith in his son that one day he will realize it by himself and he even failed in grade 9 coz he was too into drugs and did not want to study at all.