Shadow Control - Reviews

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Chapter 20.Mc is a cringe Female Human simp.That did go from a Military Person to Brainless teen.And yes Mc is of course a chinese what else did I even expect from this?????????

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Bas translation and generic story makes it harder to continue reading.

It was actually quite enjoyable until chapter 171. From then on the translation quality droped from standard English to garbage machine translator. I will not give more than 1 Star until the translation is fixed

One of the stronger novels from this terrible batch. This novel features:-Decent Translation Quality (feels like a chapter was skipped before the tournament though).-Soulless world and characters. Not quite cardboard though.-Sexism (chinese obligation at this point).-Boring and uninteresting story.Compared to the other novels from this batch this isn't the worst thing ever but it's still pretty bad. I wouldn't recommend reading this but if you really have nothing else then you could maybe consider it. I wouldn't though, even with my ridiculously low standards.T

The grammar is perfect.the work epic.and you are legendary dear author

Chapter 5 Sitll UntitleIn this eating day Urdin has eaten five (5) spiders including spider killed by black spider. With Tra Mor Ver One on his back Urdin looking for his next target but what he got. . . . .four (4) spiders join together to kill him. Two of them intercepted Urdin from the front, while the other 2 prevented him from fleeing."Wow, spider are working together. They know how to use strategy gang me up so can beat me."This is first time Urdin against group of spider. "R~Overfangs"One down. Only left three (3) spiders, one (1) in front of me and two (2) behind me. Two of them who behind me try to bite me. They got my two (2) legs which i use them for rush. I can not escape if only i use my legs so only one option i have kill 'em all.

Please continue these and I accidentaly wrote my review on chapter 1. I know it has been a year since a new chapter and it was stop becuase you had a family emergency but please continue this novel. I sent a power stone and if you continue I’ll send more. please.

You thought that this will be the successor of vampire/werewolf/(and the likes) system? Well, not quite...The plot and writing is bland at best and still wondering why the mc must have to be japanese and his personality wasn't that of a striking man he is either. The constant——————is really unnecessary and the first chapter could be make up better. The author didn't do daily update like what his profile would say so I don't really likes where it was going.I won't stop you all who reading this from trying this book, it's just a matter of preference. So much for first winner of wpc.Good luck for the author tho, don't take this review to heart, try reading some great book out there, even there was plenty on this website, best of luck.

The way this story is developing is really good and I like how the MC evolves. I also like the way you wrote the book. This is a good read, keep up the good work.?