Shades of the Unseen - Reviews

Fabulous amazing story of the wrights legacy!!!   Love it all!!

There are frequent grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, however that isn't the worst part. After chapter 133 or so it drastically changes the story. Instead of fang Chen we get Jian. instead of the martial spirits cultivation system, we get the usual core formation and nascent soul cultivation system. It's like the author accidentally switched up projects and pasted the wrong book.

Compared to True Martial World's translator, the translator of this novel is way too greedy. While comparing their translations on both novels, the translations on this novel is subpar with a lot of grammatical errors. If you're going to compare it to TMW's smooth translation and not google translated which you can read from 7-11 spirit stones per chapter and unlocks after a week or so where you can read it for free, this novel's beyond compare and beyond redemption. Though a lot of people are still reading this novel (well, me included) this novel is becoming like those novel that are being dragged too much to become a milking machine for the author/ttanslator. 1.1k plus chapters and the protaginist is still a weakling. And the stroy being too much of a repetition. That's a hell of snail paced and over hyped and mainstream chinese novel for you.

Brain dead MC with an indestructible plot armor.People says don't go more than 3 meters deep (because its very dangerous) but he does anyway.Butts in to other peoples business for no reason and the only thing he gains is enemy.Has an opportunity to learn skills ; he chooses the books based on their names. Not even opening the book to check out the descriptions or anything.Not to mention author making mc's soul beast look like a joke so that others can mock him.OH and mc never questions about the world he lives in, techniques that he's using.(If you don't know, ask your teacher... smh)Don't bother reading this.....100ch+

Update the story please. This series is awesome although I have watched anime but I want to read this novel and this is not completed yet meanwhile anime is going to end this season please update it????

I have to say, as a massive fan of the Zelda video games I absolutely loved this! Gave me serious Breath of the Wild vibes. Loved the idea of goblins and creatures suddenly appearing from all over the world, and temples which have to be cleared to level up and progress - straight out of an RPG game. The fight scenes as the protagonist battles his way through small hordes of goblins are all great, as diverse as can be in various sword tactics and very well-written. I liked how the protagonist has developed from a meek child and is transforming himself into the hero of the piece as he discovers he has a natural ability to defeat the goblins and is growing in strength the more enemies he defeats. Really great stuff so far. This story has a really pacy opening and has limitless potential  to go very far. Highly recommend giving this a go.

"Get served" system that provides everything and anything.Let's be honest.It's just godhood that gets "explained" with a lot of stupid nonsense filler.My mistake. No it's not godhood. A god wouldn't even consider an animal harem.It's just a m@strubation session of the author and everyone has to bear witness and rate his "performance" with 5 stars.No thank you.

The story is alright later on, but the ending is horrendous. There are 30 extra chapters after the ‘ending’. These chapters dont even finish off what they were trying to complete, it ends on a cliffhanger. There are several plots which just dissentagrate in the ending and it feels rushed. like the author got bored of the story and hadnt thought the ending through. Like he reaches his goal and everything is quickly resolved and its like welp he reached his main goal bothing else matters...

I will get to each reason why and will update frequently maybe every fifty chapters 1:Writing quality- most is great writing quality the only issue is the lack of description and depth to the world and story which correlates to two other, there is also the fact that it doesn’t explain a lot about time, so it gets confusing, that’s why it got a three2:Updating Stability- pretty standard not to the point where I can read a new chapter everyday but I can understand so I still gave it a 4 star3:Story Developement- the story goes fast paced which doesn’t allow me personally to get a sense of depth with the characters and it kind of goes too fast with the affinities and gaining of abilities, that’s why I gave it a 3 star4:Character design- we don’t really don’t get any defining features of the character like body build background or history so it makes it hard to envision it which is why it got a 2 star5:World Background- we don’t get a lot of explanation about the world and what it looks like and we have no history of anything like families of the characters or anything like that so in my opinion that’ s why I gave it a 2 starI thank you for reading my review and don’t let it keep you from reading the story because the concept is great this is only here for the author to better his book, have a great day this will be updated when we reach 50 chapters so look forward to it

Spectacular novel... the plot twist is mind juggling. The set up is unique as well.. it’s a fascinating novel. Will urge all to have a peek after the first chapter you would get hooked.

Shameless author review, I have really high ambitions for this novel and I hope you will follow along the twists and turns of the story! thanks

Su madre lo mira desde la entrada del castillo, animándolo para que no se rinda, ella sabe lo asqueroso que puede ser este mundo así que no lo detuvo.