Sexual Torture Game/System(Dropped ;-; srry) - Reviews

The only Achilles heel of this gem is that there are only 5 chapters, apart from that this is really good.

That we would be happier with 10 chapters?

That is also true.

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Your writing is very interesting
I love the syfy additives
Very curious in how you got you ideas
Your writing is beautifuly descriptive and I will recommended this to my best friend who is very into the syfy bdsm
Your a true writer

Would you accept a
a Loki/Arrowverse challenge,
A Game of thrones challenge,
A Star Wars Challenge,
A Harry Potter challenge,
a 100 Fanfiction Challenge,
A Highschool DxD challenge,
A Percy Jackson challenge?

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Bad grammar but not to the point of being unreadable. Good ideas for the erotic contents that cover various fetishes, but they're told in a way which is lack in details. As a result, readers can't get immersed enough to fully enjoy it.

need more chapter my friend
this masterpiece really have more imagination and fetish than i am

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The *** scenes are good, but the characters and plot are poor. The story could be better. Also an exact explanation of why the main character was chosen. But you can guess why she was chosen.

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