Compulsory Author Review :/
Now that we’ve basically reached the end of Volume 1 Arc 2 (Chapter 23), I thought to write a review. Also use this comment section as Q&A if need be.
The synopsis is pretty sh * t so I need to work on that. The story is one of character growth:
MAIN CHARACTER:
Here we have a fat, middle-aged dork who has to change his ways from becoming reclusive and not being anything to speak about, to becoming rich, charismatic, physically strong, and se * ually capable.
It will take a while.
From these first two arcs, I think I have presented how insufferably pathetic he can be, but also how much potential he has in the tank to become the 4 traits I mentioned earlier. His lowered moral inhibitions will also play a factor in propelling him (rather rapidly) to become an interesting individual and great MC.
HAREM:
My goal is to make the female characters as 3 dimensional as possible, while also making Samuel’s encounters and relationships with each as interesting as possible. I plan to cap the harem to about 8-12 women (including inc * stuous relationships). Flings and s * x friends may be considered once he is actually rich, but for now solid relationships is the way. Harem will be diverse and cater to many fetishes: M * LFs, V * rgins, Bullies, Twins, Bookworm and everyone’s mother lol. The whole lot.
As highlighted in the synopsis, this story will also delve a lot into MC’s interactions with the world at large (AU Earth)… how he grows rich and the details of the process, as well as how he slowly becomes a ‘Chad’.
SYSTEM:
The non-sentient system is a complex tool at Samuel’s behest, that constantly grows and is honestly one of the most attractive features of the story I’ve written in my opinion.
I can’t think of what else to mention here. If you have any questions, leave a comment and I’ll answer promptly.
P.S: Please give my story until chapter 15-20 before considering if it’s worthy to continue reading. I am confident your impressions of the story will change many times over these initial chapters anyway.
Happy reading.
