Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic
This novel may be good for some a people , but for me it's NOT. Because I don't like novels where MC are full of ignorance.................................................................
I see nothing wrong bc it such a great, great. At first I thought it was one of those simple and similar BL but this one was quite different. Maybe it’s bc I haven’t read a lot more yet but this is a great piece that I enjoy very much.
The MC is pretty stupid and seems to be mentally retarded, but the story is funny.......Seriously author, could you make the MC a little less retarded and give him the intelligence of a normal person?
Very good story. Thanks for the work autor-san, i hope this got bigger because you deservet it.Good luck for the future!..........................................................................................
A searing pain in his back leg stole Arawn's breath away. It stopped him mid jump. He tried to catch himself, but it was too late, and he fell in a pile of squirming and screaming bodies.
Finally, Han Li took it upon himself to personally close in on her, having done what he could to restrict her movements. In a flash of silver lightning, he disappeared, leaving only rolls of thunder in his wake.
Years ago there was a fear in the people that lived in the time of a God. A living God. John 3:16 says, " For God so loved the world that he sent his one and only begotten son that whosoever believeth in him should not perish but have everlasting life" God had sent his son Jesus not to condemn us but to save us! As john 3:17 says That he didn't send his son into our world to condemn it but for the world to be saved through him instead! God is moving but no one is seeing. Those who sin will one day open their eyes and cry out for forgiveness not knowing it was already too late!!!
