- Review as of 20 chapters in:
This is a transmigration system novel in a cultivation world that is ruled by sects.
Our mc Is transmigrated into a 14 year old boy called Kai, who is a slave with nothing to his name and gets a system. Now unlike most systems I dont find it to be too op or broken yet, Which personally I like. Makes the mc seem more vulnerable, relatable and allows for growth. What does his system do you may ask? Read it and find out.
•Writing Quality•
Author has the occasional grammatical errors, however as an avid reader I read very quickly and build an idea of what is going on in my head therefore Isn’t noticable for me.
The way author lays out system status is very nice and easy to read.
•Story development•
Unlike most sect creation novels, mc doesn’t (or has yet to) produce anything out of thin air such as a sect building. This gives the novel a nicer, slower pace than other sect building novels.
This seems like a novel where we will see the mc work his way up step by step and toil away to build his sect. I say this because the Author might have foreshadowed mc becoming an alchemist in order to secure funds to operate his sect. Furthermore, bare in mind mc is only 14 years old. I imagine most sect leaders are much older than this and therefore may be quite a while before we see any actual sect development. However there are already signs of the mc’s first disciples, which is a good start.
•World background•
Author does a good job of slowly introducing the background world and not info dumping everything all at once. It also helps that mc knows almost nothing as well so as he learns we learn with him.
All in all this looks like a novel with a lot of potential and was something I enjoyed reading. I wish that there were more chapters, so thanks author looking forwad to see what happens next
