The story is great but the author writes in a twisty, jumpy manner that is extremely hard to follow sometimes. It’s like starting at the end of a chapter then being told the middle and having to just figure out the start. He also says the mf “speaks” when he is clearly thinking to himself as what he says has no baring on the people around him in the scene. Overall, it’s a good story and a great one if the author can fix some of these issues.
