Secret of heart -betrayal - Reviews

An interesting start, you are good at describing and creating scenes and atmosphere. I enjoyed what you have written so far.

The noval is pretty good. We follow the MC as he develop, learn, and build himself. I guess I gave it low rating because the main plot still isn't clear to me until now (ch238). I can see that the author is building the MC and the others. But until now isn't giving enogh answers to questions about where is the is novel going. Great Mech battels, that is not enogh.

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This is too funny if you are someone who can read without taking things seriously you are guaranteed a good laugh this one made me tear up this needs to get picked!

I ONLY READ WHAT THE BOOK IS ABOUT AND ITS STUPID!! Y WOULD ANYONE READ A BOOK ABOUT SOMEONE ONLY SUMMING A SCARECROW??? ITS ONE OF TUE STUPIDEST TH9S 8 HEARD OF!!!!

This is one of the best novels I have read its only problem is the low chapter release so far I am only chapter 20 I hope the novel continues this way and please increase the number of words per chapter

I've read to chapter 36 so far. you know alot of people might not like this novel because of the slow pace compared to other trial reads but it's actually pretty interesting. we do not know much about the world yet but we know that the mc is not in a game but in a different world type situation. The mc is smart but not evil like in many novels. I really look forward to see where this novel goes.

Honestly this is boring nothing more to be said...                                                                                                   

This story is very well written and doesn't feel like a translation at all (not sure if it is or not). It has a very different style compared to a lot of other novels here.There is a unique style of introducing the characters & the world. Very intriguing plot! I'm excited to find out what happens when they get to Vegas.

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After reading until chapter 150, I can safely say that this story is one of those glorious hidden gems that truly get way too little attention to how good they truly are. So, first of all, is the writing quality. The writing is decent, it is not the greatest of grammar, but it makes you emersed, invested, and truly is comfortable on the eye. The world background slowly improves, although, I have to warn you xianxia fansand the like, this story doesn't have the world-building you see in the 10,000+ chapters novels, but it does a pretty good job at it as the story progresses. The characters are oh so amazing. Seriously, you'll come to love them a lot (even the villains) and you truly despise the author when you see bad things happening to them, which only shows how amazingly written the characters are. The story development and plot are truly unpredictable. It's not generic in the slightest and has some plot twist, cliffhangers, and moments that truly leave you speechless. It is beautifully crafted and executed well to the point where you can binge read 60 chapters per day yet feel as if you've only been reading for 2 minutes. Pssst, do you want to know something even more interesting? All those praises that I gave this story....are all for 1 volume out of 20 glorious volumes that each far surpass the other.Go on and read this marvelous novel right now!

So he's the one that killed me? I could feel my fist starting to clench...No I can't fight him now, like this. I am too weak.