Second Life Online - Reviews

im rly sad you stopped this one.
shame on the fkers who ****talked your  amazing story.
if you ever go on, ill be you nr1 fan ^^

oke 1st review ever, this 140 char thing sucks xD
ill keep track of you if i can!

Very cliche start, with a few ridiculous points in the plot you have to ignore. Like, MC supposed to be top military something... but only been in four years, with no contact in that time.  No explanation yet.  Writing is mediocre, but the plot has hope within the tropes.

I liked the first six chapter very much.... good enough???? And a few more things to make up for the 140 words )(6&;6&9(689&5)421(&@95;)&&874/(!865

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Estava tão feliz de achar uma novel que me apaixonei logo de ar podia continuar, e muito boa mesmo. O personagem principal por mais que seja muito forte logo de cara mas e feito de uma forma crível.

Great story please update  soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing please! As a premiere SSS Potatomon, I require tons of chapters as evolution material, and this is quality work. Loved it! Now I just need to finish writing 140 characters.

If this doesn't deserve a review, what does? Rhetorical question please do not stoop down and correct a potato. Let the potato speak his words freely. The potato needs chapters as evolution material as he is a high ranking potato. He is actually the #0 ranker, check it. I'm just rambling for 140 characters.

Really good one... Up up up... Recommend!!! Everyone let vote this novel....

This story was stolen from another website, where it was dropped a long time ago, don't expect any updates

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