really great work what I think the author could add was the side jobs, skills and status of the MC in an auxiliary chapter or whatever the chapters before 1 are called
A ton of grammar mistakes, remember use apostrophe, clause, and etc. Like, the "ill" one instead of "I'll" I could mistaken as ill as in "sick". Please use proper capitalization.
I like the story very much. It's just a shame that this novel with a different title in another app were suddenly removed. It would be much appreciated if you could update the chapters very quickly. Kudos to the author.
Ugh it is just like any other typical chinese cliched story with a transmigrator, crippled body, breaking off of engagement and then getting a cheat . Not my cup of tea at all.
I feel like this could be a good story but once again Chatgpt or another AI took a large part in writing this. The vocabulary and the way the scenes are described just feels unnatural and too deep for a fantasy novel. Maybe if you used a bit less AI and more of your own writing skills this could be better
"Don't worry, my family covered for him and got the guy who molested you sent to jail." Good, River is okay. I feel weirdly happy, I don't quite understand this feeling.