SCARS OF THE PAST - Reviews

I'm really enjoying this so far! Writing a good hook that draws your readers in can be difficult, but the writer definitely hit the nail on the head with this one. My attention was caught within the first paragraph and the following events continued to pull me in. I look forward to reading more!

the MC should be very good in multiple choice ???it will full of slaping face (hard) scenes. just hope for the best from author, ????

Author here. As this is just the beginning wanted to give you guys a heads up. This novel is going to be a Harem novel with some mature content. So those who have Harem or have suggestions about it, I'll hear them in comments.             Back to the story, as you can already guess this story take place in Martial world with clans, empires, etc. There are many legacies in this world left behind by some of the strongest cultivator and even of some unknown. Our Mc recieve the inheritance of Demon God, also known as Death god .              There are many mysteries regarding this legacy, it's secrets and how it ended up on mc's planet. But that will be disclosed at the right time. There is many good things to come. So stay with me and if possible add to your reading list. I'll try not to disappoint you.                If you have suggestions or some ideas about the story I'll hear them and possibly include in the story. And a Biiiig thanks to everyone reading.

I just want to say that the way you wrote your story is absolutely mesmerizing. I find myself getting dragged upon by the waves that are your writing. Please keep up the good work!

A great novel so far and a unique concept. I hope in the future he doesn't rely too much on belief and people to power himself.                        

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Each chapter is less than 500 characters. Read a couple of chapters and nothing remotely interesting is happening.No world building, no character dept. The only thing that we know is his age and dream.Most of the chapters are like reading a movie script.My advice. Pour more effort in each chapter, make it longer, more meaningful.Your grammar is okey to read. Instead of making a list of things to do, make it him saying what he needs to do, why and a backup plan if that doesn't work out(Don't you make it like that in your head in your daily life ?)I will come back later, hope you fix the problems :)

A lot of authors write something like: Hey shameless author here im rating my book 5 stars blablabla. Sorry to disappoint I'm not shameless (i think) it's called promotion, and i do really believe my book deserves 5 stars, if you agree or think otherwise do leave your comment, i will read them all be it good or bad, i appreciate every critique, flaming on the other hand is ill advised, i can use voodoo so beware :creepygrin: I do hope you all enjoy this book as much as i enjoyed writting it!

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