Savior with Expiration Date - Reviews

to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror.story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very niceCharacter: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke..updatig stability: I don't know!world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!

the author does not even look at the comments of the chapters. people criticize him too much, but the author does not even respond, the novel is literally mc without a brain.

Cliche                                                               .                                                                           .

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The grammar used has very few faults, and it is well-written. The plotline seems amazing, and I hope you can keep up with the good work!???

Chapter 10 currently. It seams that the author has rewriten older chapters and latest is done 3 days ago. If it had more chapters and faster publishing I would  recomend it fully. As of now I will still say that start of this book is very interesting and as it seems that its not droped you could put it into your libary.The game world here is quit original I hope there will be lot of chapters coming soon.

Brows furrowed, Gordon contemplates his next words. "It could, or it could lead you down the same path..." he wipes his forehead with the back of his hand. "But you might be right, and I doubt I could stop you anyway, you've never been one to take no for an answer."

"That wasn't an option. That was an order,"

"yes, he take you to the right addres" , aku masih tidak dapat memahami maksud tindakan orang ini

I told you to shoot them dead, not use your lightsaber and cut them to pieces. Now the jedi are alerted to our presence, they sent a jedi strike force out to attack me on Tatooine, I destroyed them and discovered a message sent to the jedi by....you." The sith grand master stopped walking and put his hands behind his back and stood still as Darth Kaiz walked on. "Kaiz, I'm back here, not up there." The dark lord said as Kaiz still walked on, he finally stopped and turned around and force-threw a Terminator bomb at the old grand master. The dark lord held up his hand and deflected the bomb back at his apprentice. Darth Kaiz started to force-run away as the bomb detonated, releasing small bomblets into the air and continuing to follow the sith apprentice. "Stand and fight you tusken raider jawa!" The sith master yelled.

Anyway,if I can reincarnate each time I die,why am I running away from the FBI?Because they would probably ensure that I stay alive and will then be forced to become a slave for the government,not being able to die or have any freedom whatsoever.

「......Un♡」