Hi! This is my first time writing, and since no one gave a review, I would like to be the first. xD I will give my novel a five-star review because that's the hope I have for it.I believe the world background and story development Are and Will continue to be good, but like everything else, they can be even better. (like better expressions, new ideas.. and, as I don't have much experience, it may lack in those.)But, I hope that by the end, I will know how to write a better novel, So, I ask everyone to tell me where I can improve to become a better writer. Peace!