Ruler of the martial world - Reviews

As interesting as this novel is, it's very hard to read. The characters are interesting, I love how feisty the mc is and the world seems interesting so far. I would be looking forward to reading more, but the writing is hard to understand. There's a lot of grammar issues and words that are substituted with other words. The premise is good and this has the potential to be an amazing top-notch story, but I suggest the author gets some help with proofreading.

Although I feel like everyone and their mom has an Emporer called Kong ming. The author has a vivid imagination and and I am expecting more from this novel because writing novels like this need something to set it apart

I mean I know in the synopsis it mentioned grammar problems... but if that isn't even done well it doesn't bode well for the acc story. You still want it to look promising.

first of all you seams new writer.  it’s ok keep writing you will Learn more.
about story development It's like other Chinese cultivation novel but you add some extra about haven that other novel don’t say.
you didn’t say much about main character design how he looks now.
update is main factor keep it up update Daily.
Don't make world like main character go from one realm to another It's  boring.  make something different.
keep learning and keep this novel as long as you write You'll Learn.  your idea is so keep it up.

Great work bro.I'm so proud of you(you know why). Although, you have to improve your grammar skills, the concept is quite clear. Interesting so far. Good luck.

a great story can come of this but you will need grammar corrections and an expansion on the story I would recommend that you do not drop this story as it can become a huge hit if reworked

overall it seems like a promising novel to read. the author needs to get a editor or write this in grammarly or something cause the grammar gives me a stroke.

The story concept is good.  Some chapters switch to a completely different novel in the middle of a chapter.  Most of the chapters writing are a little hard to read but not to bad some editing can fix; however one chapter at least was extremely hard to read I would say machine translation but I've read some machine translated novels that were easier to read then that one chapter (chapter 117), most chapters are not bad and the story is interesting so I have stuck with it for that long but not sure if I will any longer.

amazing story....nice plot....and I love action novels . Especially those martial arts stunt and all.
would be looking forward to see more and more drama and martial scenes

Good novel.  I fall in love with this novel.............. ................................................. ....... ................................

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don’t want to say anything just keep it up.  learn more. good story thinking..  ......... ......................................................