Royal Sentence (Steamy Historical) - Reviews

I really love this novel...... Leon is a good man and a wonderful human being.......

Honest reviews are here.. I saw my previous reviews have been hidden.. lol.. I gave 4.6 stars before and positive feedback.. I think my review was hidden by the author might because of spoiler detail..It is unbelievable that my review got hidden, so I refresh it many times and go other novel to see my other review.. Then come here again, I still can't see my previous review..So now, when I saw my previous review were hidden, I would give new evaluations.. 1.6 stars.. I hope the author is happy with my review now..

Perhaps my biggest issue is the lack of any descriptions of either settings or people. As a reader, you have no idea what any of the characters look like beyond some of them being simply described as "jade beauty". No hair/eye colour, hairstyle, clothes, places or settings are described, nothing about the architecture, décor, I'm not even 100% sure on what era this is set in or the current level of technology.Additionally, up to chapter 40 at least, there isn't any real sign of an overarching plot, beyond some vague hints in chapter 1. There is some conflict with "young masters

You ever watch DBZ, where one fight spans 10 episodes? This novel is similar, it tells a decent story once you get past the irritating start, but there is just too much filler. Author needs to stop rephrasing everything and just get to the point. Cut down on the unnecessary backstory, you don’t need that much world building. Really difficult to read and get into it.

If you want truly a novel where the protagonist is fun to read.I recommend you oneConditions to read:1.Brain cells must have gone under mutation 2. The novel got pretty boring after 200th chapters or something. Well here  I go, 我不想长生不死啊Well if you don't like, i don't care..xd

I suggest readers to read the first three chapters before judging it.Writing Quality: Author have improved it from his previous experience of writing his other novels. So expect the novel to have few or no grammar mistakes.Story Development: Plot is that of a system user with a virus system that is similar to the game known as plague inc. But this isn't a fanfic of plague inc and is an original novel.Character Design: MC is merciless which is fitting of his identity as a terrorist. Don't have many comments about this.Updating Stability: Author has consistent updates. Although the author doesn't update daily, expect at least an update every week. The author isn't getting paid for this so don't demand him to update everyday.World Background: A cultivation world with chinese origin from the past era. Fitting of the cultivation setting so nothing to comment about this other than author did well by not info dumping the world background.Overall: A must read for those who are finding system novels with a unique system.

I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting ?I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺

Great read, although I wish it had more updates.

The pace of this novel is so f**king slow, you could cut more than half of the words and the sotry wouldn’t lose anything significant. It’s not bad, but it needs heavy editing and cutting

'You will not be able to use me, the system while being on this world.' She said in a serious tone.

Xiulan's eye wanders to the documents on the table beside her. It's an information report about this spy.

" I see... Harduid is an Advance Sky Champion and Aaron an Intermediate Sky Warrior, but we should call Violet too, maybe she is in the Kingdom " Joseph asked the Prince with a serious expression