First, this stupid "*SFX" is so annoying to read.Second, the characters in this Novel is so Childish. For an example about a Woman who always took MC away after he finished off a monster, it's an Arrest!Third, let me tell you about Comedy in this Novel is at elementary student so don't expect to make you laugh, at most only smile. Fourth, It's looks stupid for OVERPOWER MC got all his Abilities such as Mana, Undying Body, and Magic taken away after his return to Earth from other world. Fifth, MC doesn't say anything when he got taken away, i mean atleast put on resistance. But, thw author put this Novel on Comedy so yeah it's to be expected for the MC to let it flow like that. Sixth, there is flaw with his Little sister because he is back after 5 years from home but his little sister act like a thug without having any Emotion for him, considering he help punching his little sister bullies when she got bullied.Seventh, i'm done with my critics and have a try if you think it suits you.
