Rivals to Forever - Reviews

"Hello, Elixir Supplier, I am going into battle and I want your strongest Elixirs.""My Elixirs are too strong for you, traveler.""Elixir Supplier, I tell you I am going into battle, and I want only your strongest Elixirs.""You can't handle my Elixirs. They're too strong for you.""Elixir Supplier, listen to me; I want only your strongest Elixirs.""My Elixirs would kill you, traveler. You cannot handle my Elixirs.""Elixir Supplier, enough of these games. I'm going into battle and I need your strongest Elixirs.""My strongest Elixirs would kill you, traveler. You can't handle my strongest Elixirs. You'd better go to a Supplier that sells weaker Elixirs.""Elixir Supplier, I'm telling you right now; I'm going into battle and I need only your strongest Elixirs.""You don't know what you ask, traveler. My strongest Elixirs will kill a dragon let alone a man. You need a Supplier that sells weaker Elixirs, because my Elixirs are too strong.""Elixir Supplier, I'm telling you I need your strongest Elixirs. I'm going into battle! I'm going to battle and I need your strongest Elixirs!""You can't handle my strongest Elixirs! No one can! My strongest Elixirs are fit for a beast let alone a man.""Elixir Supplier, what do I have to tell you to get your Elixirs? Why won't you trust me with your strongest Elixirs, Elixir Supplier? I need them if I'm to be successful in the battle!""I can't give you my strongest Elixirs because my strongest Elixirs are only for the strongest beings and you are of the weakest.""Well then that's it, Elixir Supplier. I'll go elsewhere. I'll go elsewhere for my Elixirs.""That's what you'd better do.""I'll go elsewhere for my Elixirs and I'll never come back!""Good. You're not welcome here! My Elixirs are only for the strongest and you're clearly are not of the strongest you're clearly the weakest.""You've had your say, Elixir Supplier but I'll have mine. You're a rascal, you're a rascal with no respect for knights. No respect for anything...except your Elixirs!""Why respect knights...when my Elixirs can do anything that you can..."

Shameless Author Review. Please support my novel, thank you all in advance! I hope you like my novel, even though I still have a lot to learn but I hope you will continue to read the story.

I don't know yet what to expect but it seems promising for now. I happen to like this type of story so we shall see. I will update the rateing when it comes out with 40 chapters but for now it seems promising

I like how this story has started. Although the author mentioned that the first chapters are being edited, I would like to say that it has potential. I also appreciate his vocabulary ('cause I have poor vocabulary hahaha),  and the character development? Great job and keep writing!??

"Proceed" Lady Oba didn't beat around the bush

even though the MC  has everything needed ... keep doing unnecessary things ... doesn't learn from his mistakes ...the author keeps forcing plots ... idk why... maybe for more words? or just has no clear plane for the novel...anyway keep the hard work Author ... am sure you will do better in the future...

"Ok bang...." kata Rose yang bangun, dan pelan pelan dia menonggeng di sofa tu.. pelan pelan meletakkan handbagnya.... dan hpnya.... 'dia mesti tengah pandang bontot aku ni... biar dia nampak panties aku ni.. hihihi!'

I am sorry but I dropped this firstly I just didn't have it in me to write anymore chapters and now I can't access my old webnovel account due to the guard I am sorry to those who were waiting for another chapter

Nagulat naman ako dito sa babaeng halos mangitim na ang kulay ng mukha dahil sa make-up nito na puro itim. Sandali makasigaw to ayos ah!

" Apakah kamu selalu bangun siang hari seperti ini? " Tanya Raymond dengan wajah marah.

Karna, right now, was trying to run in the extreme gravity of Saturn while his breastplate was getting increasingly heavy by the second.

From the author - This is the start man