I don’t have much to say at the moment. Will be updating this at chapter 50. It is quite a nice novel this far. It could use someone peer reading and helping fix minor mistakes, but otherwise its got potential.
A major recommendation is to put a ranking system. Though this might not work depending on how the systems align across planets. If you do put recommend a spoiler at the top of said info page.
Really nice to read but the math is the problem? If you're okay with it then all is good. The MC is nice just kinda monotone where I'm currently at but hope it would develop more interesting characters.
nice for a beginner work
I sense talent and potential from this although has a few gaps or issues here and there it doesn't spoil the reading experience
This is very nice to read. Although, however, the chapters are a little short for my taste, and it's very fast pace. But other then that, I can't wait to read more of this book. Good luck
to be honest, has high potential, but a lot of wording mistakes along with number mistakes that pull you out of wanting to continue reading. the kids seem to be way more mature than they should be at the described ages. and alot of other small problems and consistency issues.
