Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I really appreciate an author whose mastery of language is good. This book has a bit of everything. Language- check,imagination- Check, creativity- checkA beautiful plot- checkand finally an alluring narration. highly recommend it
I say, don't give up on this novel because of the very, very bad grammar in the first chapters.Also, you might think that this is a version of Moonlight Sculptor, and that the MC is like Weed. It looks like, but it is not.Although the development of the history is fast and you can't get yourself to like some of the characters, but you might like it nonetheless.
It’s sad to say but it’s basically a dinosaur themed first order. There is some difference that I think it could be it’s own novel but the horrible time looping, jumps, and weird conversations take away from the novel. A good editor could fix this novel but I don’t recommend this for picking in its current state.
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Recommended, the story wasn't as cliche as I thought it would be. The writing style was simple to read and understand. The characters felt real, not over the top. The skill seems OP but let's see. It must have a weakness right?!
