Rise of the Abyss Walker - Reviews

Very nice list. Only thing is that it’s missing the greatest masterpiece ever written, the novel above all novels, the undisputed magnum opus of all literature, one of the 7 forbidden texts of Korea…….. INVISIBLE DRAGON

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Have yet to read this but will update once I do. However, the premises of the story is based on a betrayal in game. I don’t know why it would matter so much since it’s only a game—it’s not like their life is on the line like in SAO. Why doesn’t he just start over? Better yet,  he should choose better friends.Doesn’t sound that interesting but I’ll read it anyways since I’ve caught up on all my favorite stories.

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la historia tiene un comienzo presentable, tiene un desarrollo posterior que no es desconocido, sin mucha novedad, es muy apegado a lo estándar de novelas de sistemas, como para complacer a los lectores que gusten de este estilo de lecturas, en cuanto a los supuestos reinos del cultivos y las rarezas de las cosas,plantas, materiales, se nota una desgana en cuanto a su contexto, es decir, son solo nombres vacíos, solo se colocaron como para que quepa en un supuesto de un entorno de mundo de cultivo, por eso no es tan recomendable

Alright, i droped this at chapter 22, why you can ask ? (some spoiler ahead )Well it's simple and i think i'm not the only one who droped the story before it even really begin : The author made the mc too dumb (probably to make more chacarter developement later) , he doesn't make any rationals choices and is surprised over logical things everybody know.Let me explain : The mc get reincarnated in another world, (so far so good) but he is born as an half demon, then he get a system. The system force him to become a full fledged demon and he is now full of distrust toward the system. For this he decided... to stop drinking milk ?!? And then he is surprised that he will die in 8 days if he don't get sustainance ? Were you a human in your previous life (he was) or what ?And then just after that (really it should be in the same or next chap) he decide to explore the system and use a technique with the not at all ominous name "Demon might mystic technic" or something like that...And that just one exampleBruhAnother thing : the complete lack of imagination toward names, father = christopher, mother = chrystie...Still this story has some good points : the grammar, a big number of chapters, and an author who still read the comments of it's firsts chapters.If you can ignore the stupidity of the mc in the intial chapters, this should be your fit if you like demons and stuff (there is only so much i can take)But here is my honest advice to the author that i think could improve the story : First and foremost, rewrite the mc in the first chapters, this story has a lot of potential (just look at the comments) but the mc being dumb cost it too much. In the first twenty chaps, i saw the comments dwindle as i read. I dont know if the author has stats to see how many people read his story but i'm sure 50% of his inital readers (first chap) didnt pass the 20 chapters.Second, make more exotic name or least that don't sound the same (if you don't have any idea, use a generator on internet or just ask your community)And third, more descriptions : what i mean by that for example is the mc second pair of eyes : he get them when he become a full demon but where are they ? On his forehead, temples, cheeks ? Also are they pitch black like his normal eyes ? We don't get anymore  info other that he growed a pair of eyes.That's all for me, thanks for the story

still no update? please give us some chapters

I read the first couple of chapters. I can't help but draw a comparison to "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime (Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken (TSSDK))." Think of this novel as a juvenile version of TSSDK.The dialogs are cringy, and the MC is pretty similar to TSSDK with a minor variation like MC from slime to caterpillar, even some abilities are the same. There are many other parallels between the two from story to side characters to the system (Mystery Voice). All of this would have been fine if the novel was engaging, but sadly it is not.

Nice read, reminds me a lot of Warlock in the Magus world with the theme. Keep it up.                                                                  

I'd first like to say. the author is correct. if you love slice of life and cliché plots. this fits for you. however if you like thoes but like them at a decent pace with moderate progress in plot. this isn't it.there is much potential in the beginning of this novel it has a decent pace. it's a bit slow as it follows time for maybe a bit to long befor the first major "event" is what I'll call it. however from their you will begin to see the story start to build more in this new perspective of the world that is so poorly explained that I still only know so little of even after reading to chapter 338 (time of review) this novel has hope and it has its funny moments. but I'd almost say the author either goes to far into the tinny details of things or just dosnt want to make the story so fast that they write it slow. 6 chapters after a 1 week timeskip just to have a single tea party. 40+ chapters to progress 5hours of a single day. stuff like that. you won't be getting anywhere in the story proper and much info gets hidden away in the few time skips that do exist.not to mention all the times you'll read "that's for later" or "no need for thoes details now"if your going to read this, I want to warn you of all this now so if you don't have the coins be cautious diving head first. if you can find time for FP's or maybe 20% vouchers you might be ok. but that's if you don't like these kinds of novels but still wish to read.if your a new reader on this app give this novel a chance and explore what a dream novel is like from an aspiring author. if your a veteran like me with 4500hours on just this app. maybe this might be one to skip. all depends on your personal preferences. in the end this is my opinion. I'd wish to say this novel is higher then a 2.6 but out of 5 it really is just average. it's still far better then a good chuck of all the Chinese translation works ?.

After an hour or so, he started feeling much better. His leg didn't hurt anymore and he could now inspect it. It looked like an old burn that had healed now, and the scar was slowly but surely healing and disappearing. He looked towards the hole and no light was coming in.

"Yeah I think I remember that! Dad suddenly left me to fend for myself for weeks. I was 4 years old then." Touma said while pouting.