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Revenge on my Mafia Lover
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This book will give me nightmares of I do not learn how it ends. Keep on updating dear author. I want to see what happens to our female character.
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woow, keren pakek banget, neeeext dong, please. banyakin bab dong, jangan banyakin penasaran
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As others have stated, this novel is very much a slow burn with rather slow progression and more detail on the finer details such as worldbuilding. Conceptually, I find this aspect of the story most interesting which is very high praise considering I'm more into fantasy over sci-fi/mechs. The level of detail is just right, in my opinion. Though it does tend to stress certain concepts several times, it doesn't feel repetitive unlike in a certain sword god novel. I noted that certain arcs felt 'slow' at the time, but looking back, they're very much necessary in how they contribute to worldbuilding and the overall plot.Character development is rather good for this reason as well as being a non-plot-driven slow-burn. Other characters are distinct in their characteristics and dialogue and it's not just a slew of side characters.I'd definitely recommend giving this novel a shot.
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Story progression is bad. The events are forced and rushed. His time as a slime was very short and the latest events were pretty exaggerated.
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this book has a lot of potential. However, the downside is that it's lack of updates, but that's understandable for this author and writer because of the growing problems of lack of jobs and/or family issues.
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The story has a lot of potential. So far it is amazing.
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The female lead is really intelligent and smart. I like her. I hope her life will not end miserable.
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After a short, rather tense, stand off, I decided to act. I mean, c'mon I can take a rabbit. I move closer and closer to the rabbit, trying to shake off this ominous wind I feel. Once I'd gotten within 2m, I hefted my sword up, preparing to use my only offensive skill.
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Xian Junzu eyes narrowed. Once again, it flicked dangerously alarming the young girl and finally made her ran away ! Observing the fleeing figure until she disappears in his line of sight, Xian Junzu conceited mouth arched into another arrogant smile.
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"Sana ako din ang rarampa diyan sa entablado balang-araw."  tahimik na pinapanuod ni Cleade ang pageantry na kasalukuyang ginaganap sa school nila.
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"What are you standing there for, boy," grumbled Vernon, noticing Harry standing by the door. "Hurry up and sit down."

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