Return to my demon husband before he dies in battle for me - Reviews

(NÃO É NECESSÁRIO, COMER, RESPIRAR, DORMIR)

"Oh ok, no problem." I took a bite of the cookies. "Wow, delicious! I whispered.

Leon looked where the voice coming, and saw a breaded, and a bit gray-haired guy was talking to him. He was clearly the captain from his uniform, so Leon didn't beat around the bush and directly told him.

THE white carpet was complemented with a beach blue and a light grey. Eliana, walked with grace as her pure white dress trailed behind her.

"Foolish humans! You thought that that mere fire could kill me? Ah, this is one of the funniest jokes I've heard in a long time!"

Continuing to back away, her heart jump into her lungs when her back hit something. She looked around only to see the Durange tree. She take a heaved of relief, but before she could recover. She saw a face on the tree trunk! Red froze on the spot, she don't know what to do, she tried to run but her limbs didn't listen to her. She tried to scream but no voice came out. Red pushed herself to do some, taking her sight from that face. Its eyes was red and gleaming with excitement while it slowly smiled sinisterly. Until, a small voice suddenly came out from her mouth, after that she regain control to her body.

"I think I can be of assistance," she said before she brought her hand up to her lips and whistled loudly causing Luffy to see something running towards them from Rainbase. In a blink of an eye, the creature appeared in front of the duo surprising Luffy. It looked like a banana gator, but it was different, it was slightly smaller and had a saddle strapped to its back.

Narrator Pov

Dude after 150 chapter the author just changed his writing style. Its fees like I am reading some ancient text or something. Like how should I say this, it's like this line here ' The Null Estate loomed ahead, an indomitable fortress of heritage and might, carved into the heart of the rugged valley' Its presence exuded an aura of silent authority, an ancient testament to the power and lineage that guarded it, standing steadfast as if to shield against the encroaching shadows cast by recent upheavals.The estate's entrance unfurled like the maw of a slumbering giant.' I mean you could have just said the' null estate' that it feels like he is trying to fill the chapters with unnecessary words to expand them.

Interesting start of the story I can’t wait to see what will come of this book

Rating: 5/5 (Because why not?)Alright, let’s be real—I’m rating my own book a solid 5/5. I know it’s not perfect (first book, after all), but this is my creation, and I’m here for the ride. What I can promise is a wild, entertaining journey with Zephyr, our main character, and an adventure that will keep you hooked.Perfection? Yeah, that’s not the goal here. But fun, excitement, and a constantly evolving story? You bet. If you’re looking for a tale with action, growth, and plenty of surprises, then this is the one.If you're reading this, please leave some feedback in the form of a review or even reply , positive , negative it doesn't matter , I'm all ears .Your response means the world to me and it is what motivates me to write further

not sure would enjoy it...main issue with the story is it let's down expectations Mc is at his lowest abandoned by everyone then suddenly gets a system turns everything around in a month dude is framed for embezzling half a million...but suddenly declared innocent after he pays it?also family interactions are what killed the story for me ...dude initially ignores everyone's calls for a few days..goes home and has a convo..that's it..while it's admirable that there is no rage or angst..dude essentially becomes a doormat..like especially it's a one word apology from his sister who not only publicly verbally abused him..also supported his ex to breakup...then there is the rest of stuff like Zack or mc suddenly doing the chinese street race gig romance with Lila is another bs as it moves too fast like 3 dates in...mc be like no one likes me like Lila. wtf...read if u like slice of life.. no revenge or angst here