Return of the Martial King - Reviews

this is just trash, i kept feeling frustrated.

Hey was wondering when u will release new chapters I love this story so far and seeing as you have replied to others in the last 2-3 weeks I would imagine that you would be releasing them soon

Starting chapters really impressed me! The concept of guy bullied by other boys seems interesting because what happened in the real life is interesting to read as a story.

It felt like a typical vampire story at first, but then it turned out to be a time-shift case, idea is kind of uniquely hidden inside the story- and I can feel there is many mysteries hidden inside this plot!

A work of art definitely. Story progress smoothly and positively, and continually proves the fact that it is both unique and effective in its writing. The author effectively is able to build the world and the story with intricate details and word play that shows they are someone with experience in writing, to be able to continuously make me want more. Good luck!

This novel is quite good but the stability is poor author makes too much novel but the chapters is less than 10 so  i suggest prioritse this first and become more proficient at this before making another novel so when you make other you know how to write more exiting stories

I cant stress enough HOW AMAZING THIS BOOK IS.Or how much i love it! It has such an interesting story plot and the character development so far is supppppeeeerrrrr gooooooodd!!!!!!Props to the author, who did an amazing job!!!!!

best Naruto fanfic, great MC, good story, interesting ideas??

He had just finished a running session with the other recruits when a senior called out to him, saying that someone had come looking for him.

Something like a seed flew out of the cotton ball which turned into a vine covering liepard which was followed by a green light which signified that liepard was getting drained.

"What?! No! Tell them he's going!"

Max looked at his feet while trying to hide a smile; so that's what she has been up to. Max thought as he backed toward the door, before she could change her mind.