5 Stars. Just wanted to promote more of Showbiz novels with male leads. There are very few Showbiz and Sports novels. Hope more of Showbiz and Sports novels get translated.
The novel is good..... Mc doesn't become outright OP, have little mental issues (which is expected with regression) please don't give it up. Though status page update would have been good. Like how while fighting his agility suddenly becomes 50?
story is great and the idea is fun. but writing quality? sh*t. sentences (most of them) dont make sense which is regretful. i liked the story .will add it to my library tho. hopefully it gets fixed.
Hello, I'm the author of this novel. I just started writing so I'll appreciate your feedback reviews so that I can continue improving my skills. If you think that this novel is pretty good I will appreciate your support.
Ok this story seems quite nice. BUT it seems MUCH is lost in translation. One second this is happening and then "Bam!" the story changes. No clue how or why. I am not sure if this was the writing style of the author or if the translator just omits weird parts. So as a reader I say enjoy it but prepare to be frustrated with how the story bounces around and you as a reader have to figure out wtf is going on. I myself still have parts I am unsure what happen.
" Hmm... " Hayato bows his head with a serious face ' This guy doesn't seem to be lying but how he will face his brother and his allies alone? I should... no if he is so sure of winning I shouldn't interfere '
"Entendo seus sentimentos cara, tenho uma irmã menor, tudo bem então, vou chamar alguém pra te levar para casa" Silas fala enquanto liga para alguém em seu celular.
Without looking back, I tried to dash towards the opposite direction of the sound. Emphasis in 'tried', because with all the bushes and twining roots covering the muddy soil, it was incredibly difficult to traverse the forest's terrain.
