Return Of The Betrayed Primordial Mage - Reviews

I rolled out of my bed , with tears stained eyes .

the first thing she saw was a kind-looking old she-beaver sitting in the

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no one knows about Sophie's father real identity..

I'm usually not a big fan of constant bickering, but I think I can forgive this one. Both the character designs and the plot is awesome, I've read too many books where the mc is  weak, pitiful, and constantly abused but never stands up for himself and this novel is like a breath of fresh air. Keep up the good work author!

Interesting story!! I can’t wait for more chapters and see how FL will progress through her hardships. Though, I would love for her to be more a strong-willed confident female lead.