Beginning of the story is typical. You can say cliche :D It's ok, these kinds of novels are fun to read but I am concerned about many things. I don't see any errors in grammar. (It might be a problem that my grammar isn't that good either.) I will continue to follow the story and update your review.
Good luck! (The rating is temporary. I cannot really rate if I have only 3 chapters. It's like judging the book from its cover.)